【高分作文】
Dear Leslie,
I’m glad I can teach you Chinese and also I’m happy you have been making great progress in studying Chinese these days. I’m writing to tell you something about my plan for my next Chinese class.
It becoming hotter and hotter, and to order to save time, I’m planning to have our class next time from 8:00am to 11:30am on QQ video in our homes. Please enter QQ on time then. We’ll study something about Chinese Tang poetry. Therefore, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty outside of class in preparation for next class.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
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【高分揭秘】
作者对题目内容进行了适当而合理的发挥，将第一个要点浓缩在一个简单句里，将第二和第三个要点整合成具有“因果”关系的内容进行表达，从而使得文章读起来朗朗上口、信息量非常大、结构非常紧凑。另外，过渡语句、独立主格、高级短语等的运用不仅使得文章行文连贯，而且也增强了文章的可读性。
（鸣谢：本套试题由北京曲一线5·3英语系列图书主编杨小平、高利平、程云满、吕品、陈金文、胡陈杰、张峰、王德昌、贾仁起、丁士勇老师解析。）