五、连写句
连写句(run-on sentence)是指两个分句之间本来应该用分号、句号断句的地方没有使用适当的标点,而是使用逗号进行连接,或不加任何标点就把两个句子写在一起,例如:
1. CharlesDickens created the character of Mr. Micawber, he also created Uriah Heep.
2. EliasHowe invented the sewing machine, Julia Ward Howe was a poet and socialreformer.
3. Thefans rose in their seats, the game was almost over.
以上这些句子是病句,我们可以通过以下方法修改:
第一种方法:使用句号,创造两个独立的句子;
1. CharlesDickens created the character of Mr. Micawber. He also created Uriah Heep.
2. EliasHowe invented the sewing machine.Julia Ward Howe was a poet and social reformer.
3. Thefans rose in their seats. The game was almost over.
第二种方法:使用分号,创造一个并列句;
1. CharlesDickens created the character of Mr. Micawber;he also created Uriah Heep.
2. EliasHowe invented the sewing machine;Julia Ward Howe was a poet and social reformer.
3. Thefans rose in their seats; thegame was almost over.
第三种方法:使用and, or, but,nor, for, so, yet等并列连词,创造并列句;
1. CharlesDickens created the character of Mr. Micawber, and he also created Uriah Heep.
2. EliasHowe invented the sewing machine, andJulia Ward Howe was a poet and social reformer.
3. Thegame was almost over, so hefans rose in their seats.
第四种方法:使用关系代词、关系副词、从属连词,创造复合句。
1. Thefans rose in their seats because the game was almost over.
作者简介:葛文山,江苏省英语特级教师, 原点英语创始人(教育部国家级教学成果奖)