八、运用分词结构
1. 分词作定语。
(求助信) I am confronted with some serious problems which trouble me a lot.
→ 升 级 表 达 : I am confronted with some serious problems troubling me a lot.
2. 分词作状语。
(求助信) Because I have been faced with the above problems, I am writing to ask for your assistance.
→ 升级表达 : Having been faced with the above problems, I am writing to ask for your assistance.
(申请信) I am an out-going person, so it makes it easier for me to get along well with others.
→ 升级表达 : I am an out-going person, making it easier for me to get along well with others.
九、插入语的使用
适当加一些插入语也可以丰富句式,写出新意。一些短句、副词、介词、分词短语或者动词不定式都可以放到句子中充当语气较弱的插入语。常用插入语有:I am sure, I hope, I guess, I think, what’s more, what’s worse, what is important, luckily, undoubtedly, obviously, hopefully, by the way, in short, generally speaking, to tell you the truth, to be honest 等等。
(建议信) I hope the above suggestions will be of great help to you.
→ 升级表达 The above suggestions, I hope , will be of great use to you.
This activity can help students cultivate their awareness of cooperation and have a further understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
→ 升 级 表 达 This activity can help students cultivate their awareness of cooperation and, more importantly, have a further understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
十、运用With结构
(2015 全国卷 II)As the Double Ninth Day is drawing closer/approaching, we are scheduled to visit the Nursing Home on that day.
→ 升级表达:With the Double Ninth Day drawing closer / approaching, we are scheduled to visit the Nursing Home on that day.
牛刀小试: 按要求升级下列句子。
1. (2017 全国卷 I) I will give the lesson from 9:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Sunday in the classroom 201.
→ (用被动语态) __________
2. (感谢信) I could adapt to the American life quickly because of your selfless help.
→ (用虚拟语气) _____________
→ (用with 结构) ___________
→ (用强调句) ____________
3. (2017 全国卷 I) As we know, Tang Poetry is one of the Chinese precious traditional cultural relics and also has a far reaching effect on the cultural development in the world.
→ (用not only...but also 倒装) _______
→ (用非限制性定语从句) _______
→ (用同位语) ___________
4. (2017全国卷 II) I am sure that the paper-cutting exhibition will leave a wonderful impression on you.
→ (插入语) __________
5. (2017全国卷 III) The sport of table tennis can not only prevent us students from getting short-sighted, but it can also help us keep physically and mentally healthy.
→ (用倒装句) _________
6. (2016全国卷 II) Our school photography club is going to hold an International Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection.
→ (用定语从句合并) _______
→ (用with 结构合并) ________
7. (2016全国卷 III) I feel awfully sorry to tell you that I can' t go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→ (用感叹句) _________
8. (2017年全国卷 II) Now I am glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper -cutting exhibition which is held by our school.
→ (用非谓语) ________
9. (求职信) I have rich experience of social practice and great communicative competence, so I firmly believe that I can be qualified for the job.
→ (用分词作状语) _________
→ (用with 结构) __________
10. (感谢信) You are very kind and generous to help me a lot during my stay in Almeria.
→ (用it 作形式主语) __________
11. (2012全国卷 II生日聚会) At first, we will light the candles and sing the song “ Happy Birthday ” together for him. After that, we will enjoy the birthday cake and have fun together.
→ (用被动语态,定语从句改写句子) __________
12. (2016全国卷III) It is a great pity that I can' t go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.
→ (用感叹句) _________