2023年12月4日作文讲评

应用文

开头写I’m Li Hua，没有写目的，没有写完，字数超了。

单词及语法hold过去式held, know过去式knew, 过去分词 known,  成功错误表达was succeed，正确表达was successful,

校运会活动项目怎么写。

So interesting and meaningful is the activity that all the students think highly of it and hope it will be held in the future. 

Not only did it improve our physical quality, but brought joy to everyone.

范文

Our school's sports meet started last Wednesday and lasted three days, bringing a wave of sports passion.

Compared to last year, this year's sports meet included more events such as swimming, volleyball, and hurdles.All the athletes spared no efforts on the sports field, achieving extraordinary results for their class.They showed their talent and sportsmanship, which received enthusiastic cheers and applause from their classmates.Thanks to the athletes' dedication/devotion, the sports meet was a great success, with 11 records broken.

The sports meet was highly regarded by all teachers and students.They saw it not only as a means to improve physical health but also as a way to relieve pressure.