2011广州市一模英语深度点评

短文概括步骤：

【1】  抽取文章每一段的关键词或短语：

第一段：Li Hua, lesson, overseas Chinese student

第二段：amazing academic achievements, good job, dishonest

第三段：subway, no ticket

第四段：honesty，the best policy

【2】   注意时态，用自己的话连词成句

个人版本：Li Hua told us a lesson that an overseas Chinese students failed to get a job despite his high scores because he didn’t buy subway tickets. We can learn that honesty is of great importance.

大作文：

大作文写作步骤：

【1】  题目要求几段，就写几段。

【2】   每一段必须有漂亮、清晰的主题句。

个人版本:

（1） After reading this speech, I have a set of mixed feelings.

（2） Numerous examples keep reminding us that honesty is very important.

（3） Having talked about my friend’s experience, I should always bear in mind that honesty is the best policy.

【3】写完主题句后，补充的内容必须扣紧主题。