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发布时间:2009-06-01 13:25:00
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  在高考写作的评分标准中,语言占了10分,内容10分,结构5分。但是事实上,掌握好结构远远超过了5分的收益。一个考生如果不懂文章应该是什么样的结构,就很可能不知道应该如何构思,不知道怎么构思,文章的内容就会不符合逻辑,甚至文不对题,导致在内容上失分,而一个内容不充实的文章,也很难在语言上出彩。这样一来,结构可谓“牵一发而动全身”,关系到整篇文章的写作。所以建议同学对结构好好研究,熟记于心。但同时要注意的是,要从本质上来把握结构的逻辑,不必死板地套用结构,只要在逻辑上讲得清楚就是一篇好文章。比如在细节论证的时候,有些同学如果使用了较长的句子,只用一个细节论证也是可以的。比如下面一篇文章从表面上看跟刚才讲的2007年高考写作略有区别,但本质上其实是一个逻辑,请大家参考。

  It is universally acknowledged that a good present is of great value to a person and even prone to change his or her life. As for me, one of the most meaningful presents I have given to my friends is a watch which had accompanied me for more than three years.

  The watch was given to Tom, who is one of my best friends. Diligent and warm-hearted as he is, he sometimes has no sense of time, which causes him to be late for many things and leads to some trouble in work. By giving him such a watch, I hope he will pay more attention to punctuality, which will bring him more credibility in life and higher efficiency in both work and study. Besides, he used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the new environment after leaving the old friends in high school, and thus I hope that such a gift will remind him of the good old days we happily spent together and help him to feel better when he misses me.

  Anyway, I do wish that Tom will like this present, which hopefully will bring him good luck and motivate him to fight for a better future.

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