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性格的描述

She has a host of strange behaviors, not the least of which is her love of fish.

She's happy to stay home all day and she is always going into hiding. 

When it seemed as though the storm had finally passed, Sissy left me long enough

学习的词语

强调句 But it is her agoraphobic tendencies（公共场所恐惧症的倾向）that are the most striking. 

The rains had come and stayed for forty-eight hours, complete with thunder and lightning that tore through dark skies. 

I did a double take, reaching for my towel and drying my eyes to get a better look.

 Yikes — what a place to hide!

When the sun broke through the clouds a little while later, Sissy went back to normal