[我的课] 2022年11月8日 写作讲评

推荐学校附近新开的健身房。

写信目的；情况介绍；约定一起锻炼

Dear Simon,

Hearing that you’d like to work out, I’m writing to recommend the newly-opened gym near our school to you.

听说你想健身，我写信向你推荐我们学校附近新开的健身房。

With professional coaches and various kinds of fitness equipment, this gym is a great place for us to exercise. It opens every day from 9 am to 10 pm. If you apply for membership, you can get a big discount. I’m also considering taking exercise, so if you like, we can exercise together.

有专业的教练和各种健身器材，这个健身房是我们锻炼的好地方。每天上午9点到晚上10点开放。如果你加入会员，你可以得到很大的折扣。我也在考虑健身，所以如果你愿意，我们可以一起锻炼。

Looking forward to your reply.

期待你的回复。

Yours,

Li Hua