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高考英语写作指导-妙笔生花有亮点

来源：高中英语教学交流
发布时间：2011-07-17 23:03:00
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　　众所周知，语言的最高层次不是传统语法所说的句子，而是语篇。语篇指的是一系列连接的语段或句子构成的语言整体。一篇好的文章不但句子正确，要点齐全，更重要的是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。因此，恰当使用好连接性的词语和句子，是使作文有亮点并获得高分的一个重要因素。下面表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词，对高考写作很有帮助。

　　高考写作中经常用到的一些连接词

　　逻辑角度

　　合适的过渡性词汇

　　时间顺序

　　first, second, then, finally/at last, immediately, suddenly , soon

　　空间顺序

　　here, there, on one side…on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to

　　对称顺序

　　for one thing, for another thing, on one hand, on the other hand

　　转折顺序

　　but, however, while, though, otherwise

　　因果顺序

　　because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)

　　条件顺序

　　as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless

　　让步顺序

　　though, as, even if/though, whether, who(what, when, where)-ever

　　递进顺序

　　what’s more, besides, to make the matter worse, what’s worse

　　过渡性插入语

　　I think, I’m afraid, you know, As we all know

　　例如

　　Now in the country areas，there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follows:

　　To begin with，most families are poor and can’t afford their education. As a result，they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. In addition，some parents think daughters needn’t go to school. Therefore，they don’t let them go to school. Finally，some children are not interested in their studies. To make matters worse，some wouldn’t like to go to school.

　　As far as I’m concerned，all the children including girls should be educated. Besides，the whole society should pay attention to it because they will play an important part in the future of our country.

　　四、避免口语书面语混用

　　笔者在平时的教学过程中经常发现学生在书面表达练习时，经常口头语与书面语混用的情况。既然是书面表达，就应该使用书面语，杜绝使用口头语。下面是笔者在平时教学发现的具体例子。

　　1.It is hard to get the general idea of this article. ( 口 )

　　It is difficult to grasp the general idea of this … (书)

　　2.A friend is a guy you can depend on when you are in trouble. (口 )

　　A friend is a person you can depend on when you are in trouble. ( 书 )

　　3.The United Kingdom is made up of Great Britain and Northern Ireland.(口)

　　The Unite Kingdom consists of GB and NI.  (书 )

　　4.I decided to have a go at learning swimming. ( 口 )

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