换一种方式研究高考真题

第二节  书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历。给外教写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式。

(1) I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

(2) Dear Mr. Jenkins：

I am Li hua, from Class one, Senior two. I am writing this letter to ask a favor of you in the hope that you will kindly help me to polish some English materials that I have written.

In this coming summer, I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign trade company to gain social experience. In order to get the job, I have to stand out by an impressive application and resume. Though they have been finished, I am not sure about the wording and format.

So I really need your help. Thank you so much.

Yours,

Li Hua

(3) Dear Ms Jenkins,

How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a student of your English writing class. I am writing to ask for your assistance in my English writing, in the hope that a greater success will be added to my job-hunting.

Intending to apply for a part-time job in an overseas-funded company in the coming summer, I have written an application letter as well as a resume, which has been attached to this letter. Obviously, only after taking your class have I made such great progress in English writing. However, it‘s clear that there is still much room for improvement. Therefore, I am wondering if you could kindly spare some time to check my materials before next Friday, offering valuable comments on my use of words and format.

I am fully convinced that with your professional idea, a much more brilliant version of the application letter and resume will come out.

Thank you for your due attention, and I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully.

Li Hua

(4) Dear Ms Jenkins,

How are you doing lately? I'm Li Hua, a student from your class. I'm writing to seek your assistance in the hope that you can kindly furnish me with some revision tips regarding my application and resume for a summer job.

With summer vacation around the corner, I intend to apply for a part-time in a certain foreign company, which I believe will be a golden opportunity for my personal growth. Yet I'm afraid that grammar and turns of phrase in my application materials may have left much to be desired as a result of mother tongue interference. Furthermore, there's likely to be something wrong with the format considering that it's my very first attempt at this type of formal writing,

I would very much appreciate it if you could spare the time to revise the documents attached. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua