新东方版
Dear Smith,
I am Li Hua, president of our Students' Union. It is my great honor to invite you to be a judge and reviewer for our candidates in the English speech contest, The Great Bay Area and Me, which is scheduled on 30th, March, 2019 in our school hall.
It is with the intention of enhancing the mutual communication and expanding the cooperation among the sister schools in Guangdong, Hong Kong and Macao that we organize this activity. Additionally, there will be 30 students from eleven high schools participating in this whole-day contest. Knowing that you are an excellent English teacher with abundant speech experience, I am sure that it would be a great success if you could offer professional comments and guidance to our candidates.
I would be obliged [əˈblaɪdʒd]感激 if you could accept my invitation. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
官方版
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, the president of the Students' Union. We will hold an English speech Contest at our school on March 30 and I'd like to invite you to be its judge.
This contest is intended to strengthen ties and co-operation between sister schools in Guangzhou, Hong Kong and Macao. The theme is "The Greater Bay Area and Me'", and a total of 30 students from 11 different high schools will participate. Should you accept, you'd be expected to grade and provide some feedback on each student's presentation. I know the students would be very grateful for your participation.
If you could get back to me with your decision by the end of the week it would be greatly appreciated.
Yours
Li Hua
爱智康版
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, Chairman of Student Union. We are going to hold an English speech contest with the title of The Greater Bay Area and Me. On behalf of our school, I am writing to see if we could have the honour to ask you to be a judge in our coming competition. Here is a brief introduction about it.
Aiming to strengthen the communication and cooperation among sister schools from Guangdong, Hong Kong and Macao, the contest will be held on March 30h,2019 in the school hall. The first half will start at 9:00 am and last for 3 hours and the second half will start at 2:00 pm, during which 30 students from 11 middle schools will deliver their speeches. There is no doubt that the contest not only serves as a platform where competitors can present themselves but also provides the audience with a chance to learn more language skills.
As one of the most experienced foreign teachers in our school, you are expert in both Chinese and English. I sincerely hope you could accept our invitation and come to our competition as well as give the competitors comments. We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua