冯晓林,首届全国中小学外语教师名师、首届全国中小学外语教学能手、广东省高考英语命题老师、广东名师工作室主持人、深圳市中学英语学科带头人、深圳市特区建设青年突击手、深圳市优秀教师。
深度研究近20年高考英语作文,你会惊奇地发现:有那么多“不变”,那么多不变的“核心考点”。
本期专家视点,冯晓林老师带你聚焦英语写作:高考英语作文不用猜,有了这些核心考点,个个都是“增分点”!
一、“李华”没变,“20年的留级生李华”没变
可关键是:考生,你要把自己看成是“李华,这样才能写出有感情的文章,有感情的文章才能获得改卷老师的“感情分”。
如:I am a student of the class. 如果写成:I am a student of yours就更有感情,或者写成I’m Li Hua from English writing class last lesson更切题。你才会写出这样替老师着想,体贴的话语:I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. (2016)
又如:I am writing to keep you informed of the teaching plan of next class. (2017)你就很难以一个老师身份写出:keep you informed这么好的表达来。
二、 贴近时代,用“电脑”做事没变
但是考虑到城乡差别,故写email较多。故,一定要掌握这些词汇:
1)the Internet;
2)the website;
3)submit an application (这里submit是一个非常棒的词,很能体现用电脑做事);
4) in the attachment; be attached to;
5) contact me by e-mail;
6)My email address is lihua@1236.com;
7) send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com,
8)sign up on our school website before August10. (2017) 等等。
三、核心词与词组,高频出现没变
foreign,因为与外国人进行交际,如:As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and culture of them.(2017)
hold, will be held, 这个词学生最容易犯错;
send过去式与过去分词sent,最容易混,还有:lose与lost;
news不能说a news,要说:a piece of news. 名词还要记住:information不用复数,progress;time;paper;work(housework, homework)等。
建议advice不可数,suggestion, tip可数;
学生俱乐部 the Students’ Club,学生会 the Students’ Union;学生中心 the Students’ Center等;
方便,如:for it is convenient to both of us(2017);
申请 apply(v.),application(n.);
志愿者 volunteer;活动activity;schedule这几年常用;还有available;
“参加”是这些年最高频词汇,如:2017年全国卷join the table tennis team ; 2016年全国卷, Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. If you want to join, you can...考生切记:join(become a member of, e.g. Join the club, the team, the class, the group, the Party, the army); join in(join sb in doing sth, in an activity…); take part in; take an active part in, be active in; be present at; attend (attend a lecture; a meeting; attend school means: go to school); take/have an exam; participate (participate in an activity 是高级词汇) 。而且,attend这个词,近几年使用率最高!