读写任务议论文写作高分技巧
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发布时间:2013-01-16 21:20:00
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Love and Concern Make Ideal Relationship
Students are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students.
While some students might have doubts, I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot.
In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.
二、读写任务议论文写作高分技巧
(一)
阅读下面这篇短文,按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
No one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day. Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people. Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect, but about 80 percent is in danger. The Great Wall can be called “great” mostly because of its amazing length. But we should realize that the length was made up of one brick at a time. If we do nothing to save the Great Wall, it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.
The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years. It began in the rule of China's first emperor, Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dynasty (221 BC—206 BC), and lasted into the Ming Dynasty. The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared. The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties. Some were taken away to build roads. Bricks carved with people’s names are put away as remembrances. Rubbish is spread over the battlements. The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load. Those who destroyed and are destroying the Wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning. It will take a long time to let them know this. The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base.
[写作内容]
1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2)然后以约120个词就“如何保护我国的文化遗产”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
a)你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的?
b)保护文化遗产有何意义;
c)保护我国的文化遗产的建议。
(注:因[写作要求][评分标准]与第一篇相同而省略,以下同)
[写作指导]
(1)确定体裁:阅读材料,可以了解到万里长城目前因为种种原因遭到了破坏,并以小见大,引发对我国其它历史文化遗产保护的必要,要求写一篇议论文。
(2)拟定标题:How to protect the cultural heritages in our country?
(3)如何概括:
①找出论点(Great Wall might disappear some day)和论据(the Great Wall is being destroyed by people: to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties; to build roads; sold for 15 yuan per tractor load);
②用自己的话将上述论点和论据表达出来。
(4)发表看法:
①提出问题并加以分析:如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象,并分析其产生的根源;
②问题的支持:写保护文化遗产有何意义;
③问题的解决:提出保护我国文化遗产的具体措施。
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