2023年12月13日应用文讲评

1. Not only did it improve our interest about history, but brought joy to everyone.

2. So interesting and meaningful is the activity that all the students think highly of it and many students hope there will be more such activities to enrich their life in the future.

3. 过程是什么？ （五感：看到，听到，想到）怎么去？导游（还是老师），古董，古画，物件视频。细节的取舍（买票，何时回来等），去到之后分成几组参观。南海一号，当地小吃，风筝展馆

4. 意义在哪？ （保护文物，了解历史，增长见识，买礼物，制作手工带走）有点肤浅。

5. 感想是想下次再去。

6. 开头写目的可好？ 观后觉得累，要写观后感，

7. 时态，过去时态，第三人称单数。

8. 书写，卷面，词数。

9. Last Sunday 前不用介词。Let sb do sth,   Could +动原,    know的过去式是knew，look at the videos , have an activity,  on that day, lead的过去式是led,

A Meaningful Visit

Last Sunday, our school organized a visit to the history museum of our city. We met on the playground at 8 am and  travelled to the  destination by bus. During the  event, we  saw many shocking pictures and heard many touching stories. Besides,we visited some exhibits that featured artifacts, documents and multimedia presentations related to different historical periods.

Visiting the history museum was a meaningful experience.The exhibitions brought the past to life, allowing me to discover the history. Walking through the halls, I felt a deep sense of awe and reverence. Each exhibition told a story,offering a glimpse into the struggles and sacrifices of those who came before us.It reminded me of the importance of preserving heritage.  (117 words)

A Meaningful Visit

Last Sunday, our school organized a visit to the local history museum. The process was fascinating as we explored various exhibitions showcasing the city's rich heritage. We learned about ancient artifacts, historical documents, and cultural relics that provided insights into our ancestors' lives.

Personally, I gained a deeper understanding of my city's history and its significance in shaping our present. The visit also made me appreciate the importance of preserving our cultural heritage for future generations. Overall, it was an enriching experience that broadened my knowledge and perspective. (88 words)

A Meaningful Visit

Last Sunday, our school organized a visit to the local history museum.The first stop was the ancient section, where a diversity of historical relics were on display. We then moved on to the modern section Photographs, videos, and documents captured the evolution of our city, providing a deeper understanding of its modern history.

This visit not only filled me with a deeper sense of pride but also made me appreciate the importance of preserving our history for future generations.  (80 words)

A Meaningful Visit

Last Sunday, our school organized a visit to the history museum of our city. During the  event, we  saw many shocking pictures and heard many touching stories. Besides,we visited some exhibits that featured artifacts, documents and multimedia presentations related to different historical periods.

Visiting the history museum was a meaningful experience.Walking through the halls, I felt a deep sense of awe and reverence. Each exhibition told a story, offering a glimpse into the struggles and sacrifices of those who came before us. (82 words)