2019年全国乙卷教师下水文
来源:刘小丹
发布时间:2019-06-13 23:04:00
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广东省湛江市第一中学 刘小丹
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from China. I’m currently taking my summer courses in London.Learning that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in your gallery, I’m writing to apply for a chance to work as a volunteer.
It’s widely acknowledged that Chinese paintings, one of Chinese traditional art forms and a bridge subjectively showing Chinese value in life and nature, differ greatly from western ones. As a Chinese painting lover who once worked as a volunteer in a Chinese painting show, I think I’m equal to the job. I’m equipped with a wide range of knowledge and the basic skills of Chinese paintings, which enables me to help spread Chinese splendid culture and convey the background,techniques and inner spirit of Chinese paintings to the visitors. Furthermore,I have developed great accuracy and fluency in English and I have a good command of the skills of communication, ensuring the visitors a more comfortable and better viewing experience. I’m convinced that my good performance for the job can live up to your expectations.
Should you favor me with the opportunity? I’d be appreciative if you are kind enough to take my application into account. For more details, please contact me at 12345678. Expecting your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
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