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考前还在背所谓“写作万能句”?你太天真了


来源:独佳英语微信公众号 发布时间:2016-06-05 18:41:00 查看次数:

内容提要:不要相信什么“万能公式”“万用句型”的忽悠了。都用烂了。如果真的想把文章写得与众不同,就根据这几个基本原则:

不要相信什么“万能公式”“万用句型”的忽悠了。都用烂了。如果真的想把文章写得与众不同,就根据这几个基本原则:

以此句为例子:Our school provides a variety of optionalcourses for us.

这个句子属于平铺直叙,无亮点。根据以下三原则改编,则——

1.    用被动语态表达——突出句子核心概念词、;

A variety of optional courses are provided for us in ourschool.

2.    用好进行时——功能表意最丰富:进行;经常;总是(感情色彩);即将……

A variety of optional courses are being provided for us in ourschool.(突出现阶段)

3.    翻转式词组——还是为了突出句子核心概念,例如:

A variety of optional courses are available to the students inour school.

4.    三“从”四“式”:三大从句;各种It/There式、倒装式、-ever强调式、as前置式。

There are a variety of optional courses available/provided in ourschool. 

范文三篇

(以下三篇范文,内容、句子大同小异,根据不同文体重新组合;注意划线句如何体现上述四大原则。更重要的是:细节!组织!)

Brag是一位美国高中生,即将来华参加一个交流生项目。在Twitter上表示想认识一位志趣相投的中国朋友。他业余时间常参加的活动涉及:旅游、体育、做义工、网游、摄影、阅读、音乐等。写一封邮件给Brag,介绍一下你自己(选择三个共同爱好)。

Dear Brag:

I have learnt from Twitter thatyou’re seeking a Chinese friendwho shares common hobbies with you. NowI’m writing to introduce myself and express my wish to have a foreignfriend like you.

It is necessary for young people to participate in a variety of interestingout-of-class activities, which make our school life colorful.

I like traveling around, just asyou do. Travel can broaden our minds by learning about different cultures ofthe world. It has been one of my great dreams to set my feet to at least twentytop destinations in the world. Anotherhobby of mine is reading books and discussing with my friends. Not only do books show us a broad world but also we can benefit from them allour lives.

I do enjoy music, which has become an important part in mylife. I always listen to music whenever I’m free. Music brings me intoa different world. The feeling is beyond words. I can hardly imagine what lifewould be without music.

Playing computer games is also what I am interested in. Ireally expect your arrival and I think we can relax ourselves after school byplaying videogames, though I don’tmean we can spend too much time on it when we should study our lessons.(216 words)

 

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